This is some alright stuff, but you took way to much ''inspiration'' off Zack Scott Games work. Like everything in this video is basically copied... and it feels wrong to use this word, since you did nothing wrong. Still its the best way i can describe it. The intentionally crude but smooth art, the low poly retro backrounds, the humor, the music, and even stuff like lip syncing. Zack Scott Games has a very recognizable and unique style, so it is obvious when someone copies it. It's a real shame since you have the ability to make something truly unique, but instead you try to copy someone else's style to a tea. I'm only critical because i care, remember that you can do better :). I've been rather negative, so here are some positives. I did find the duo likable, and i love how they get rad outfits when evil for no reason.

It was alright and i had a decent enough time watching this toon.... but honestly in my opinion I feel like this takes a little bit too much from LS mark artstyle to really hold on it's own stylistically in the originality sense. I The way characters are animated and drawn are very much based off that, and while it's totally fine if you're inspired by it I feel like trying to replicate it 100 percent kinda removes the unique artistic and stylistic voice of ones style. For humor it was fine but nothing super crazy, typical modern internet humor stuff. really the one thing I'd recommend is putting some more originality and uniqueness into your art style, maybe try incorporating various things from a bunch of different styles you like instead of just trying to replicate one. I think overall the cartoons alright, voice acting could be better and some jokes didn't hit for me but it was fine. I just wish the art and animation style (and maybe humor too) were a bit more distinct, that's all really. Cheers.